Hope
By Gustav Guenther
Hope
Night time hanging
In a closet like a shovel in a shed.
I felt edgy but still could
hardly Wait to be used.
Hope
I'm still in the closet.
Unsure like a bear in a cave
Questioning. Will life be
better?
Hope
Still unsure
Like that bear in that cave
Life might be better.
An unknown Adventure.
The doors open and light floods in.
I was grabbed and helped,
to make my adventure
to Paris.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9cq2utk2JU
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Dear Gustav,
ReplyDeleteI think the object that is grabbed is the bag you took from Houston with all your things when you moved to Paris.
Dear Gustav,
ReplyDeleteI think this is about taking something from Houston and taking it to Paris.
Tommy
Dear Gustav,
ReplyDeleteI think it's about how you brought everything froom Housten to Paris. I think this peom was very intersecting! Well done!
Kaitlyn
dear Gustav
ReplyDeletei think it is talking about moving from Houston to Paris
it was awesome
Dear Gustav,
ReplyDeleteI thought your poem was great, one thing that bugged me is that you used the same simile twice. It's a excellent simile, but not so great when you use it twice. Overall, very good.
Sincerely, Cole
dear Gustav,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really touching and I felt like you when i moved to paris. This poem is very beautyful. Good job!!
dear Gustav
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and i really like your repeat phrase
from louis
Dear Gustav,
ReplyDeleteI think your poem is amazing because it is so true.
I think the bag is you. Am I correct?
I really liked your last sentence where you say
"I was grabbed and helped,
to make my adventure
to Paris."
I think you need to add your repeat phrase one more time in the last paragraph.
Amazing poem.
Best Regards, Alon Haas
Dear Gustav, Such a clear poem - Hope is always there and help is always there. Kindly Dorrit (Conrad's mother)
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